More instruments would be good
Though I respect that you tried to keep true to the original piano tune, I think you could have had another instrument take over once in a while instead of keeping it all on the keys. I think synth strings would work well if you use the right kind. Overall I'm gonna say an 8.
UBER LONG
Still a decent song. If not for the length, I'd have given it a higher score. Still the song is alright (quite fond of the tune around 4:12). Anyway I try to make it a point to listen to as much of a song as I can before making a review and that's why songs over 4 minutes tend to annoy me cause then I lose time that I could be using to review other songs. Still good song, hope you make more (hopefully under 4 minutes LOL)
Thank you for your opinion.
It's alright
Though I think the violins could use some tuning. BTW did you play these separately and edit them together or did you get a band to play this for you?
I played all the instruments separately (I wish I had a band), and to give it more of a haunting sound i meant for the violins to be slightly off each other.
Not bad
I like the polyphony in some parts but perhaps an alternate melody to fill in some of the blank bars? It sounds kind of empty when the melody leaves. Just a suggestion "/
Drums are overpowering.
I've said this time and time again with songs here on NG. If I have to listen for the melody something is usually wrong. Still this is actually a pretty good song (despite blaring drums). I'm gonna say a 9 here.
Fixed the drums I believe! - Check it out again =D
A really nice song
Very little I think anyone can do with it LOL but I can try :P
Not bad for a loop...
And @ your comments: How do you expect us to help with lyrics if all you're giving us is one part of the song? What about the hook and the chorus? And a bridge if you're planning on having one?
Anything will do for lyrics! Anything at all :). All I need is for someone to send a poem they've been working on or just lyrics they've been thinking of :D. I'll eventually work them into the song. Would you be able to help me out?
Like the small amount of polyphony...
But as a hip hop song, it could use a lot more. Try adding a bit more to this song.
for sure, i'm going to re submit it as the whole song instead of a loop in a little
Not a bad song
The kick and hat are too loud though. The clap may be too, but the kick and hat are what stands out too much for me. Try toning it down and reuploading and link me and I'll review again.
Pretty damn good song
I have to say that I love this song. So simple, so relaxing, so epic. 10/10 from me (one of the very few that I've given out so far)
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