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Not a terrible song

Not so great either though. The drum beat seems to be pretty basic IMO. Not really a fan of some of the instruments either but that's only cause I'm not a techno kind of guy LOL. Anyway it's not as bad as some of my old songs but I'm sure that as you keep making songs and keep getting better, your songs will improve in quality and complexity :D

LavitzSlambert responds:

now that's the kind of comment I like ^^

thank you for the feed, I've got better songs then this one in the past (check out my ambient one, A drop in the ocean, people like it :P)

But yea, back to this one, I guess i still have a lot of things to discover with music-creation programs ^^

thx again ^^
-Lavitz

Amazing song!

Love the instrumental and beat. Some of the lines of the lyrics don't seem to match up too well to me though. Besides that an awesome song! Gets a 10 from me.

Xayro responds:

I'm glad you enjoyed it! It is a demo, so there are obviously bound to be some errors. However, when you say lyrics, it's probably not going to be something that changes. The vocals are off slightly at the end of the second verse, if that's what you meant, and that'll definitely change. I appreciate the input :D

Meh don't like it too much

Kinda seems like the transitions are really abrupt and tough for the ear to handle. Not really a fan of the bassline much either. I would say that you should start a new project but IDK just my opinion "/

It's a pretty good song

A pretty good song considering the genre. I'm usually not into heavy metal at all but this is a pretty good rendition. Is this recorded or programmed?

Hmmm

I'm not too fond of the vocals and instrumentals, but the beat and the chords are plusses for me. Overall I'd say it's an average song. Not too great but not bad either. I'm gonna have to say a 6 for this one.

Yes it is amazing

What could only be done in a grand orchestra of 100+ musicians can now be done in your basement through a single computer. The song starts off kinda dull but starts to get interesting at around 1:18. It's a relatively simple song with no bass or distinguishable chords but a nice song to listen to nonetheless.

srzsmack responds:

hmm.... i wonder why u cant hear any bass, i actually lowered it because it was distorting the song but there was too much nonetheless... try listening to it with headphones.

I'm not really a rock man myself

But this is pretty good for one. Rock (by nature) is very simple and relies on technique and vocalists to be considered good songs. The song in terms of technique is good (but the bridge could be improved on I think) and the vocalists are not bad as well. I think I'll give this one a 9. Good job though (better than Blink 182 IMO :P )

Damn that's a nice tune

Melody is so simple yet so catchy. Drums aren't overdone and harmony (also simple) compliment the melody so much. Instruments are awesome also. What program did you use to make this?

Zero123Music responds:

thanks alot :)
and I used Sonar
I'll PM the VST/s

Reminds me of Mario Kart for some reason

If you loop this it could totally be a song from there LOL! Overall I'd have to say a 7 for simplicity though.

OMG this song (and it's chord pattern) are epic!

Seriously though the chord pattern is really overused throughout the music world but oh well. Anyway this is actually a really good remix. I made a remix and it's nowhere near this one (though mine only took me like 10 minutes to make LOL). I never put too much effort into making the remix but I can tell you tried harder than me LOL.

Kreepman responds:

haha, thanks for your review! <3
I bet your remix isn't bad :D

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